Thursday, October 21, 2010

Blog 29 - My paper.

So I have the outline for my paper and everything down. I know how I want my paper to go, I know what I want to be on it and how I want it to flow, but what I dont understand how to write is the intro. I just don't know how I want the introduction worded yet. I'm usually good at introductions, its the only part of a paper I have done for a while, but in this case I can't do the introduction. This paper is a lot different from the papers I usually write. So this is what I have so far for my paper, introduction-wise:
Buffy is a sixteen years old. She is the typical teenage girl: she is a cheerleader, she has looks on her side, and she is quite outgoing. She has two great best friends, she does average in school, and of course she just wants to fit in and be loved.
Sadly, Buffy can’t easily fit in, or embrace her extroverted characteristics and have fun with her friends often. She is the chosen one: A vampire slayer. The citizens of her city are at risk of death unless Buffy is constantly training, learning, and patrolling for vampires and other deadly creatures.
I know I need to add more to that to make it an introduction, like, i'm not done writing it yet, but I really don't know how I want to introduce my paper: how I want it to be opened. I also don't know how much description I should really put into my introduction without overdoing it and making it unnecessary and overly wordy.



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